Blog Post #4
Plans for Revision
Research has proved to be a bit more demanding than I originally expected. Since forming an outline, I have been mostly gathering sources and continuing to group them by topic and relevance. As far as the feedback I have gotten I think my primary issue is consistency; I need to pay more attention to the details. It is easy to overlook minor things like small punctuation and grammar errors, in-text citation errors, etc., while operating with the goal of creating this relatively big proposal with synthesis and supporting data. An issue I have dealt with throughout my academic career is procrastination; I prefer to do work to completion once I start. So, for the remainder of the writing I need to do, I think I will just sit down and do a section to completion and set aside a good block of time this weekend to really comb the details. We'll see how it goes!
Hi Adam,
ReplyDeleteGood revision plans as well as insights! As you finalize your research proposal, am glad you're taking note of my feedback in your literature review to tighten it further. Am fairly certain that with more development, synthesis, edits, etc. this section will lay the scholarly foundations of your research topic that will lead seamlessly toward your section on research design and methods. And I agree -- work in small sections until the you complete this project.
Overall, I think your topic will make a valuable contribution to existing scholarship on PTW once the proposal has been solidified and conducted in capstone research. Keep it up!!
Dr. B